Notes

• Threads

  • Li realising being a warrior is not all it’s cracked up to be

  • Francois reconciling his feelings about his partner who died

  • Li dreams of cannon fire because of his home village being destroyed, and Li discovers what happened to his village

  • Trying not to get caught with Li by Fennec or another soldier

  • Li is caught after defending Francois and used as evidence that the Republicans are planning an attack

• The army is on the move?

• To do:

  • Finish moving over plot points

  • Re-read story thus far

  • Give characters interesting and unique traits

    • Emphasis on Li and Francois’ growing friendship

Characters

• Li

• Francois

• Bomi

  • Francois’ once love

  • Spiritually inclined, taught Francois what he knows about it

• Fennec

• Lucky

Plot

• Hanging with Lucky, reject Li, seeing how Li lives, and bringing him in

• Li attacked by his own spirit

• Francois furious at Li for finding the shrine, Li flees, explains a bit about Bomi

• Attempted assassination in Undergrowth and escape

• Li caught,

• Undergrowth on fire, antsy soldiers demand to fight

• EPILOGUE: Meeting Francois’ spirit, he is at peace with Bomi’s spirit